Amerigo Close English paragraph 2 need help (peer editing)?
2.) This picture is showing the Don getting his hand kissed by another man, a sign of respect for the Don, most likely on the day of his daughter’s wedding. This man asking for a favour from the Don and since on the day of his daughter’s wedding he can not refuse it, he accepts. The man was so filed with joy that The Don accepted his wish that he kissed his hand. The Don in return for his duties asks for friendship. In this particular case he seems displeased for doing this man a favour from his face expression. This case goes back to only one favour he was asked during the book the one from Amerigo Bonasere. Amerigo asked the Don to get revenge from two men who hurt and tried to rape Amerigos daughter. His daughter was the Goddaughter to the Dons wife. Her mother was very close friends with the Dons wife. The Don is mad because Amerigo said he trusted the American system and thought he would get justice from it, and then said now he is coming to the Don for justice.
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This picture shows the Don, most likely on the day of his daughter’s wedding, as another man kisses his hand as a sign of respect. This man asks for a favour from the Don and since he cannot refuse on the day of his daughter’s wedding, the Don grants the favor. The man was so filled with joy that that he kissed the Don's hand. In return the Don asks for friendship. In this particular case hbis facial expression indicates that he seems displeased about doing this man a favour. This case goes back to one favour he was asked - Amerigo asked the Don to get revenge on two men who hurt and tried to rape Amerigo's daughter, the goddaughter to the Don's wife. Her mother was very close friends with the Don's wife. The Don was mad because Amerigo said he trusted the American system and thought he would get justice from it, and then came to the Don for justice.
do u believe that aliens exist and do u have an open mind?
i believe the possibility of alien life somewhere out there in the universe is exceptional,i mean its comman sense the universe is so big(billions of light years across)heck we even havent been able to measure how big it is so definitly aliens gotto exist.just cause they havent come(or maybe they have who knows) how can people be so arrogant to say this can never happen that can never happen 800 years back people believed that america didnt exist in the 1500 amerigo vespuci discovered it... FQ-are u open minded or close minded
I believe there is a great possibility of others out there and some may be here. They may not look like us, but might be that speck on the wall. Who knows? 0bama had to come from some where.
